This movie was very meaningful. I really hear ya man - "No, Mrs. Smith, I didnt show my work. I did it in my head."
The music really set the mood. The message was strong and ever-present.
Too many gradients
You use too many gradients, especially black to white. Try and make them more subtle.
Add some music to this and it would be great!
Could have been faster-paced
Lots of time in between "beatings". Otherwise, its great! Shrek sucks!
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